My heart is so full after reading your story, I can't explain it properly, so I’ll just share the scene that I keep thinking about 😊🤍
While her mind still debated, her hand seized the leather roll, and with all her remaining strength, she rolled her injured body over the edge.
Not a second too soon. Although the black current swept her away instantly, the giant spider shot its legs out like spears, entangling them in her flesh. Despite its unnatural strength, the arachnid had to submit to the force of the water. Reluctantly, it left Kivani to the subterranean river.
This story really caught me by surprise with how powerful it was 🤍 You brought out the emotions in such a heartfelt way that I felt everything right along with the characters. The way you balance depth, detail, and feeling is something very few writers can manage so beautifully. Each line kept me hooked, and your writing honestly shines with so much talent 🩷 The story was too good for me to just read and move on, I had to leave a comment.
Do you have any space online where you interact with readers?? I’d like to be in touch there so I can go deeper into talking about your story.
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